Hello there,
So I have decided to share with you this music video and have a bit of fun with my first post before getting into the hard stuff
Right now you may be wondering if this has any relevance to OT..
And it does! Music is a way in which people are kept occupied, whether it be through playing music of some kind or just enjoying the talents of others. Personally I love music and can't see myself living without it. I think Brooke Fraser is an amazing artist and hope you enjoy her music too!...
Your blog is well labelled and has a clear description of purpose.Your postings lack application of knowledge e.g. links to sourced and referenced materials
ReplyDeleteYou need to start adding content to your blog.
All referenced material should be acknowledged in posts as per APA guidelines.
You should be looking to use blogging tools to expand information links e.g. video content, RSS feeds, photos etc.
Thanks James